Talk:Lara Croft (Survivor Timeline)/@comment-24681337-20160718030845

The grammar on this page is utterly atrocious. It's constantly switching from present to past tense, there are way more commas than necessary, words are repeated several times throughout a single paragraph, sentences are being broken up into new sentences when they shouldn't be. There are run-on sentences, misplaced periods, etc. I tried to edit it, but I was only able to get through several paragraphs of her biography before giving up. Someone's gotta help me.